Sunday, July 8, 2012

Cryptic Me





I am more dead than alive
Frozen in the midst of pain
Restraining any flow
Interring the awaken soul

I am more bounded than free
Enslaved with closed floodgates
Callous I lay
Blemishing the heavenly soul

I am more a demon than human
Darkened by the glaze of triumph
Ravishing the sanctified trek
Alienating HIS divinity

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  1. hii

    the poem is intense but r u alright??

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    1. Hi... thanks for the appreciation and yeah I am alright... it's just the fragrance of my emotions..

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  3. Hi Rachit, this is a super poem ; intense and deep. How are things with you?

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    1. Hi... thanks for the appreciation and things are all good here... just got the new job and so was busy with the new work... but blogging won't have to wait much now... Weakest LINK is back! how are you ma'am ?

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  4. If you are pandering to the devil in you, shouldn't you be feeling more free than bound?

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    1. Ohh hi... welcome to Weakest LINK.... and I guess breaking up with bonds make isn't a good way to vomit the devil withing .... anyways I am still trying!

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  5. That was dark...I don't like that genre much, but loved this one, maybe because it was a short one :)

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    1. Hi... thanks for the appreciation and yeah I thought a small one can be more expressive than a longer one... :)

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    1. the deeper I look, more superficial life gets! Keep coming back :)

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  7. I sense a drastic change... Intense, and subtle...engrossing a reader it tells a story :) Loved it :D

    Cheers,

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    1. ohh... you getting mystic here.. looks the aura of poem has puzzled you up :D

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  8. Wonderfully written, has a lot of depth and meaning... we all have these moments of reflection and contemplation sometimes.

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    1. Welcome to Weakest LINK Ma'am...
      yeah at times self mirrors are needed to enlighten the soul within

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  9. hhmmmm.....i can see weakest link back with a different Rachit all together.....any particular reason...:)

    BTW how are you doing after college....

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  10. Powerful and Profound!

    Great work Rachit!

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  11. i like your comment system and color

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