Sunday, July 8, 2012

Cryptic Me





I am more dead than alive
Frozen in the midst of pain
Restraining any flow
Interring the awaken soul

I am more bounded than free
Enslaved with closed floodgates
Callous I lay
Blemishing the heavenly soul

I am more a demon than human
Darkened by the glaze of triumph
Ravishing the sanctified trek
Alienating HIS divinity

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20 comments:

  1. ASJuly 8, 2012 at 5:06 PM

    hii

    the poem is intense but r u alright??

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    1. RachitJuly 10, 2012 at 11:49 PM

      Hi... thanks for the appreciation and yeah I am alright... it's just the fragrance of my emotions..

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  2. Rachna ChhabriaJuly 8, 2012 at 7:51 PM

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  3. Rachna ChhabriaJuly 8, 2012 at 7:52 PM

    Hi Rachit, this is a super poem ; intense and deep. How are things with you?

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    1. RachitJuly 10, 2012 at 11:50 PM

      Hi... thanks for the appreciation and things are all good here... just got the new job and so was busy with the new work... but blogging won't have to wait much now... Weakest LINK is back! how are you ma'am ?

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  4. PurbaJuly 9, 2012 at 12:32 PM

    If you are pandering to the devil in you, shouldn't you be feeling more free than bound?

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    1. RachitJuly 10, 2012 at 11:53 PM

      Ohh hi... welcome to Weakest LINK.... and I guess breaking up with bonds make isn't a good way to vomit the devil withing .... anyways I am still trying!

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  5. AkankshaJuly 9, 2012 at 12:40 PM

    That was dark...I don't like that genre much, but loved this one, maybe because it was a short one :)

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    1. RachitJuly 10, 2012 at 11:54 PM

      Hi... thanks for the appreciation and yeah I thought a small one can be more expressive than a longer one... :)

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  6. BharathiJuly 9, 2012 at 3:45 PM

    A deep one

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    1. RachitJuly 10, 2012 at 11:55 PM

      the deeper I look, more superficial life gets! Keep coming back :)

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  7. TanviJuly 10, 2012 at 12:33 PM

    I sense a drastic change... Intense, and subtle...engrossing a reader it tells a story :) Loved it :D

    Cheers,

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    1. RachitJuly 10, 2012 at 11:56 PM

      ohh... you getting mystic here.. looks the aura of poem has puzzled you up :D

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  8. ArtiJuly 10, 2012 at 3:39 PM

    Wonderfully written, has a lot of depth and meaning... we all have these moments of reflection and contemplation sometimes.

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    1. RachitJuly 10, 2012 at 11:57 PM

      Welcome to Weakest LINK Ma'am...
      yeah at times self mirrors are needed to enlighten the soul within

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  9. IrfanuddinJuly 11, 2012 at 1:29 PM

    hhmmmm.....i can see weakest link back with a different Rachit all together.....any particular reason...:)

    BTW how are you doing after college....

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  10. ShailJuly 13, 2012 at 5:08 PM

    Nice lines!!

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  11. Saru SinghalJuly 17, 2012 at 12:04 AM

    Powerful and Profound!

    Great work Rachit!

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  12. smJuly 19, 2012 at 5:39 PM

    nice poem

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  13. smJuly 19, 2012 at 5:41 PM

    i like your comment system and color

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