Monday, September 12, 2011

Once, Once & Once





Once I had a dream ,
A dream to shake the world
From the ruptures of silence
Of achieving the unattainable
& Creating a new Ethiopia !

Once I was strong ,
Strong to break the mask
Compose the veracity lyrics
& Fight the serpent :))

Once it was all about me ,
Thoughts were chaotic ,
Nights were spend visualizing
& Days crawling over the dreams !

Once I was a learner ,
Passion was an obsession
& Success was an unseen necessity !

Once, Once & Once
I was with you
Loving life...

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36 comments:

  1. tarunimaSeptember 12, 2011 at 2:20 AM

    excellent!

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  2. shash.destroyer@gmail.comSeptember 12, 2011 at 7:32 AM

    awesome!!! :)

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  3. UnknownSeptember 12, 2011 at 10:36 AM

    somehow captures the mood of my day today! love it :)

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  4. UnknownSeptember 12, 2011 at 1:01 PM

    superb :)

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  5. Red HandedSeptember 12, 2011 at 1:12 PM

    Ouch! Some people just change you! Superbly crafted!

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  6. VaisakhiSeptember 12, 2011 at 1:31 PM

    this is the 1st of ur poems....tat i read....amazin...loved the thought...:)

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  7. BikramSeptember 12, 2011 at 6:36 PM

    and NOW....

    Life is beautiful ...

    nice one ..

    Bikram's

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  8. Gargi GuptaSeptember 12, 2011 at 7:22 PM

    Straight from your heart I guess....Amazing lines :)

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  9. MadhulikaSeptember 13, 2011 at 1:59 AM

    wooowww.. its beautiful :)
    Loved the way you ended it :)

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  10. RachitSeptember 13, 2011 at 3:23 AM

    tarunima: glad to see you back here.. thanks :)

    Shashank: Welcome to weakest link.. and thanks :)

    Upasana: glad to know that.. keep coming back :)

    Niya: thanks:)

    Red H: Yeah.. thanks:)

    Vaisakhi: explore the site map and read many other poems .. will love to see your comments... keep coming back :)

    Bikramjit: thanks :)

    Gargi: yeah... straight from my heart for someone special :)

    Madhulika: it was written for that ending only.. thanks :)

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  11. Blasphemous AestheteSeptember 13, 2011 at 11:09 PM

    Beautiful read, reminds me of certain lines by Housman
    Oh, when I was in love with you
    Then I was clean and brave,
    And miles around the wonder grew
    How well did I behave.

    And now the fancy passes by
    And nothing will remain,
    And miles around they'll say that I
    Am quite myself again.

    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  12. SuruchiSeptember 14, 2011 at 8:50 PM

    beautiful expressions Rachit!:-)
    sooooooooooo mush..and the last lines, take the heart away!:-)

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  13. Pramoda MeduriSeptember 14, 2011 at 10:02 PM

    Loving life :) end is so motivational..;)

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  14. RachitSeptember 15, 2011 at 2:56 AM

    BA: will read more of him :)

    Suruchi: Thanks.. the poem was written only for the last lines :)

    BP: Thanks :)

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  16. HarithaSeptember 15, 2011 at 8:10 PM

    nice one:) good lines..interesting to note that you chose "love" to end your poem

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  17. Eyelash EnhancerSeptember 15, 2011 at 10:03 PM

    I also found your posts very interesting. In fact after reading, I had to go show it to my friend and he enjoyed it as well!

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  18. Sarah malikSeptember 16, 2011 at 1:27 PM

    "Once I was a learner ,
    Passion was an obsession
    & Success was an unseen necessity!"

    I loved these the most
    very well written..touched the heart :)


    sarah

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  19. Patricia, promotional productsSeptember 16, 2011 at 5:51 PM

    Thumbs up! Be in love with your life and in whatever you have.

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  20. RachitSeptember 17, 2011 at 12:54 AM

    Haritha: I wish I could have started from love. Thanks :)

    Sarah: Thanks :) keep coming back.

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  21. Jyoti MishraSeptember 17, 2011 at 4:51 AM

    beautiful expressions..
    u said a lot in few words.
    Liked the finish.

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  22. Subhrashis AdhikariSeptember 17, 2011 at 8:08 AM

    lovely lines Rachit...but why 'once' and 'was'?

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  23. KalyanSeptember 18, 2011 at 11:29 AM

    lovely words...beautifully crafted lines!

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  24. IrfanuddinSeptember 18, 2011 at 12:01 PM

    wow...that was beautifully penned Rachit...:))

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  25. RachitSeptember 18, 2011 at 2:28 PM

    Jyoti: it was the end which prompted me to begin. Thanks :)

    Sub: It was all about past.. :)

    Kalyan: Thanks :) Keep coming back :)

    Irfanuddin: Thanks :) Keep coming back :)

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  26. Anshul GautamSeptember 21, 2011 at 8:14 AM

    oh rachit! very nice emotions. I loved it. :)

    http://anshul-gautam.blogspot.com/

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  27. RachitSeptember 21, 2011 at 11:30 PM

    Anshul: Welcome to Weakest LINK.. and thanks for the appreciation :)

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  28. RachitSeptember 22, 2011 at 2:22 PM

    Ashwini: Direct from heart :)

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  29. TanviSeptember 23, 2011 at 4:13 PM

    Wonderful wonderful lines :) :)

    Cheers,

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  30. RachitSeptember 24, 2011 at 3:48 PM

    Tanvi: Thanks :)

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  31. AnjooSeptember 29, 2011 at 10:18 PM

    :) I loved it..!!

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  32. The PoetSeptember 30, 2011 at 8:01 AM

    Hello.
    Even though the ending was full of sadness, I really enjoyed reading this.

    You expressed your thoughts very well.

    Thief In The Night

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  33. RachitOctober 1, 2011 at 12:51 AM

    Anjoo: Thanks :)

    Andy: Welcome to weakest Link.. and thanks for such appreciative words.. keep coming back :)

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  34. Quirky WritesOctober 4, 2011 at 6:45 PM

    you expressed it very nicely.... i liked it!! :)

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  35. RachitOctober 4, 2011 at 11:55 PM

    Sneha : Thanks and welcome to Weakest LINK.

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