Monday, September 12, 2011

Once, Once & Once





Once I had a dream ,
A dream to shake the world
From the ruptures of silence
Of achieving the unattainable
& Creating a new Ethiopia !

Once I was strong ,
Compose the veracity lyrics
& Fight the serpent :))

Once it was all about me ,
Thoughts were chaotic ,
Nights were spend visualizing
& Days crawling over the dreams !

Once I was a learner ,
Passion was an obsession
& Success was an unseen necessity !

Once, Once & Once
I was with you

38 comments:

  1. somehow captures the mood of my day today! love it :)

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  2. Ouch! Some people just change you! Superbly crafted!

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  3. this is the 1st of ur poems....tat i read....amazin...loved the thought...:)

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  4. and NOW....

    Life is beautiful ...

    nice one ..

    Bikram's

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  5. Straight from your heart I guess....Amazing lines :)

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  6. wooowww.. its beautiful :)
    Loved the way you ended it :)

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  7. tarunima: glad to see you back here.. thanks :)

    Shashank: Welcome to weakest link.. and thanks :)

    Upasana: glad to know that.. keep coming back :)

    Niya: thanks:)

    Red H: Yeah.. thanks:)

    Vaisakhi: explore the site map and read many other poems .. will love to see your comments... keep coming back :)

    Bikramjit: thanks :)

    Gargi: yeah... straight from my heart for someone special :)

    Madhulika: it was written for that ending only.. thanks :)

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  8. Beautiful read, reminds me of certain lines by Housman
    Oh, when I was in love with you
    Then I was clean and brave,
    And miles around the wonder grew
    How well did I behave.

    And now the fancy passes by
    And nothing will remain,
    And miles around they'll say that I
    Am quite myself again.


    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  9. beautiful expressions Rachit!:-)
    sooooooooooo mush..and the last lines, take the heart away!:-)

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  10. Loving life :) end is so motivational..;)

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  11. BA: will read more of him :)

    Suruchi: Thanks.. the poem was written only for the last lines :)

    BP: Thanks :)

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  13. nice one:) good lines..interesting to note that you chose "love" to end your poem

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  14. I also found your posts very interesting. In fact after reading, I had to go show it to my friend and he enjoyed it as well!

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  15. "Once I was a learner ,
    Passion was an obsession
    & Success was an unseen necessity!"

    I loved these the most
    very well written..touched the heart :)


    sarah

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  16. Thumbs up! Be in love with your life and in whatever you have.

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  17. Haritha: I wish I could have started from love. Thanks :)

    Sarah: Thanks :) keep coming back.

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  18. beautiful expressions..
    u said a lot in few words.
    Liked the finish.

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  19. lovely lines Rachit...but why 'once' and 'was'?

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  20. lovely words...beautifully crafted lines!

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  21. wow...that was beautifully penned Rachit...:))

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  22. Jyoti: it was the end which prompted me to begin. Thanks :)

    Sub: It was all about past.. :)

    Kalyan: Thanks :) Keep coming back :)

    Irfanuddin: Thanks :) Keep coming back :)

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  23. oh rachit! very nice emotions. I loved it. :)

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  24. Anshul: Welcome to Weakest LINK.. and thanks for the appreciation :)

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  25. Awesome. Once I was with you, loving life. Amazing lines.
    Great work :)

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  26. @ Rachit
    Yes, It reflects in those words :)

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  27. Wonderful wonderful lines :) :)

    Cheers,

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  28. Hello.
    Even though the ending was full of sadness, I really enjoyed reading this.

    You expressed your thoughts very well.

    Thief In The Night

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  29. Anjoo: Thanks :)

    Andy: Welcome to weakest Link.. and thanks for such appreciative words.. keep coming back :)

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  30. you expressed it very nicely.... i liked it!! :)

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  31. Sneha : Thanks and welcome to Weakest LINK.

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