Today I
cried
I cried to
show my pain
My love
& my hate
I cried ‘coz m hurt
M broken
& m lost
Today I cried
I cried for
the tormenting exams
For the sleepless
nights & playful days
I cried ‘coz
marks won’t matter now
No teachers
& no tutor
Today I
cried
I cried for
the wonderful days gone
For the hard
days to come
I cried ‘coz
once I was a student
Loving
restrictions
Today I
cried
I cried to
let the feelings flow
Unraveling
the hidden me
I cried ‘coz
once I dreamt
‘coz once it
was only about me
hey !!
ReplyDeletevery lovely n well expressed the phase u r goin
through.
crying is good sometimes as it washes away the sorrows of our soul and makes us feel light
ReplyDeleteOmg.....u speak my thoughts and my feelings Rachit..this sem has been a gruesome one for me and m waiting for it to get ova soon...
ReplyDeleteBut hey dont u worry my frnd...we gotta cling to 'hope' to look forward to..we gotta overlook the darkness to see a bright sun shine and then take that glimmer and tread our days forwrd..
Hoping all this is for the good...well as they say " Everything happens for the good" sure the good isn't seen at that moment but lets believe that soon we will see that it was all worth it my frnd..
lovely lines Rachit....very well expressed...student no more...welcome to the new phase of life...:)
ReplyDeletewow Rachit.that was lovely and Emotional! so your student life is over?
ReplyDeleteWOW very lovely man, loved it.
ReplyDeleteBursting in tears is more better than to get suffocate with the pain..
ReplyDeleteBut yes..You must observe the positiveness around to get feel with energetic mind set and determination..
All the best!
Beautiful would be an understatement
ReplyDeleteawwww...we hate not being students and going into the ruthless world outside-but such is life!
ReplyDeletehopefully...this would be the end of tears and time for fresh new beginnings:-)
wonderful one..... may be i shall feel the same way soon...
ReplyDeletewell its gud that you cried and let out your feelings...
loving restrictions they r indeed..this student life is so very beautiful and care-free. Its actually hard to express in words the feelings one goes thru..but then life has to move on- one phase after another :)
ReplyDeleteDont worry, its gonna be alright dude!
sarah
Welcome the our world...Very touchy poem!
ReplyDeleteRachit..its very well written.
ReplyDeleteJyoti: Thanks .. :)
ReplyDeleteAS: yeah it does.., but it just a thought.. i never creid litreally :P
Rahul: Thanks and welcome to the weakest Link.. hope to see you here more often :)
Aakriti: Good to see you back here... and yeah everything happens for a reason :)
Sub: Lets see how the new phase welcomes me.. still looking for job though :(
Mishi: its pretty much over as the next sem happens to be the last sem dedicated to fulltime industry training.. so the present sem is the last incampus sem. Hows you :)
Deepak: thanks buddy:)
Simran: and thats why I cried :)
Red Handed : Thanks :)
Suruchi: lets see how the new world awaits me.. with open arms or high ego's ::O
Haritha: I never cried litreally.. it just the metaphor expressing my feelings.. :P thanks :)
Sarah: Thanks sarah for such lovely words..
Saru: hehehe.. thanks for such a gala welcome :)
ReplyDeleteRachna: thanks :)
Hi Rachit,
ReplyDeleteleaving the college and frnds is one of the toughest moments every student has to face at some point of time! when the time comes tears cant wait any more..
we miss all the fun and the crazy things we all do being students..
anyway, welcome u to the next phase of your life..wish u all the best..
College life is the best life ever....Your tears are worthwhile for college life getting over! But life is about moving on and proving yourself in the next role too:-)
ReplyDeletesoooooo sweet,lovely poem
ReplyDeleteBP: thanks for such an open heart welcome.. yeah it hurts but its a part of life.. you can never run ouf it :)
ReplyDeleteGargi: thanks gargi... can understand it:)
Seema: thanks n welcome to weakest Link.. hope you will love reading other post @ Site Map
hey! long time! pretty cool it is! =)
ReplyDeleteRight from the heart!
ReplyDeleteDeep writing :)
It is okay to let go of emotions...I can cry at the drop of a hat...But hope and pray that you never ever have tears in your eyes...Lovely weave.
ReplyDeleteCrimson Coral: Hey hi.. hru? pretty long.. and thanks .... :)
ReplyDeleteJuhi: thanks yaar.. :)
Alka: yeah at times its good to let your emotions flow... :)
Crying will wash away the pain.
ReplyDeleteCrying is more real than laughter at times :)
ReplyDeletePurba: it does at times :)
ReplyDeleteThe BB: yeah... true words :)
WOW! So beautiful and sweet!
ReplyDelete“…let the feelings flow..unravelling the hidden me..."
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i loved the last para a lot :).... but then, thats the beauty of life isnt it...
ReplyDeleteMenachery: yeah.. the beauty is to live life as it comes... :) Keep coming back :)
ReplyDeletewriter having a very deep thinking about love ........
ReplyDeleteI find you made smart solution the moment when you selected this theme of the blog article of yours over here. Do you usually write your entries alone or you work with a partner or an assistant?
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