Thursday, March 10, 2011

A Ray of Hope




I see a dim light at the Horizon
A faint one…
Still, a light of Hope

Calling me to rise above
Asking me to be optimistic
Telling me to keep calm
Instructing me to be innovative
Even, letting me know creativity

Annoying me with her passiveness
Yet, loving me
Supporting me
Giving me a shoulder to cry,
A partner to dance with,

Don’t know where the winds will blow
I guess it can make me
I guess it can ruin me

Yet, I won’t stop looking at it,
I won’t stop playing with it,
I promise to sail around,
To rise above the mountains 
And make this world mine… :)

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10 comments:

  1. Preetilata【ツ】March 10, 2011 at 10:46 AM

    wow...it's nicely penned. go ahead and make this world yours. :)

    word verification word is: inkyari :D

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  2. Bhargavi KashyapMarch 10, 2011 at 11:11 AM

    Nice :)

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  3. AnushreeMarch 10, 2011 at 12:55 PM

    very optimistic!! :)

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  4. RachitMarch 10, 2011 at 11:02 PM

    Preetilata: Thanks Ma'am.... Inkyari.. :)

    Bhargavi: Thanks

    Anushree: Life showed me pessimism where ever I went, I retaliated back with my optimism...:D

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  5. FatimaMarch 12, 2011 at 2:04 PM

    Nice and an optimistic one !

    Keep Writing and sharing :)

    Take Care.

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  6. RachitMarch 12, 2011 at 6:15 PM

    Fatima: Welcome to Weakest Link..:)

    Thanks for sharing your thoughts here... keep coming back.. :D

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  7. TanviMarch 13, 2011 at 6:50 PM

    Beautiful.... and you'll surely make the world yours...keep going.. :)

    Cheers,

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  8. RachitMarch 13, 2011 at 9:07 PM

    Tanvi: hehehe you back here.. :) WL was waiting for you yaar..:D

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  9. Avantika KaushikMarch 14, 2011 at 2:45 PM

    very beautiful.... quite opposite to what I have been writing.. beautiful !

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  10. RachitMarch 14, 2011 at 6:42 PM

    Avantika: thanks... and opposite? so why being a pessimistic?? enjoy life and have a optimistic outlook dear :)

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